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The passing of summer,
In the rustle of leaves.
Oh that my heart could hold on to the peace,
As I am at one, and
My soul is released!

Dream a dream, where maternal love holds strong.
Where heart is the key,
And flesh moves on.
Where kindred spirits in no earthly realm connect,
And heart greets heart in,
Love and respect

Dream a dream where hope and aspiration fly,
Where youth and ambition
Reach for the sky.
Where the world is open and possibilities great,
Awaiting the cards
In the hands of fate.

Dream a dream as the world marches by,
To the beat of contentment
And the warmth of a sigh.
Where eyes raise up to meet dreamers gaze,
And Summer fades fast
In glorious blaze.

Dream a dream on the whisper of a breeze, in
The passing of summer
In the rustle of leaves.
Oh that my heart could hold on to the peace!
As I am at one and
My soul is released.
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On the Whisper of a Breeze.

Contributed by northernlights on Saturday, 8th September 2012 @ 06:36:56 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Dream a dream on the whisper of a breeze, in
The passing of summer,
In the rustle of leaves.
Oh that my heart could hold on to the peace,
As I am at one, and
My soul is released!

Dream a dream, where maternal love holds strong.
Where heart is the key,
And flesh moves on.
Where kindred spirits in no earthly realm connect,
And heart greets heart in,
Love and respect

Dream a dream where hope and aspiration fly,
Where youth and ambition
Reach for the sky.
Where the world is open and possibilities great,
Awaiting the cards
In the hands of fate.

Dream a dream as the world marches by,
To the beat of contentment
And the warmth of a sigh.
Where eyes raise up to meet dreamers gaze,
And Summer fades fast
In glorious blaze.

Dream a dream on the whisper of a breeze, in
The passing of summer
In the rustle of leaves.
Oh that my heart could hold on to the peace!
As I am at one and
My soul is released.

Copyright © northernlights ... [ 2012-09-08 18:36:56]
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Re: On the Whisper of a Breeze. (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Sunday, 9th September 2012 @ 03:27:58 AM AEST
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My second time commenting on this. Hope it goes through. Good poem.

Re: On the Whisper of a Breeze. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 9th September 2012 @ 06:52:33 AM AEST
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Very good write friend.
huggs, blessings,
emy

Re: On the Whisper of a Breeze. (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Monday, 10th September 2012 @ 08:10:21 AM AEST
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Hi Anna,

Beautifully crafted and expressive.
Another gem in your ''Soul'' collection.

Tommy

Re: On the Whisper of a Breeze. (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 10th September 2012 @ 06:04:34 PM AEST
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Such a tender soulful poem. I am going to read it again. Thanks for sharing. It is so tender and beautiful I have a couple tears in my eyes....

Hugs
Michelle

Re: On the Whisper of a Breeze. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 11th September 2012 @ 01:19:50 AM AEST
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You definitely have a way with beautiful words and this way with these beautiful words seem to be speaking about the circle of life and death.

A child dreams and then must grow up. We live ,we die, we make decisions and I an now yammering. (babbling).

Nevertheless this is a poem of beauty. I know this to be true.

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