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Array ( [sid] => 173767 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Saved Me [time] => 2012-09-07 19:54:24 [hometext] => For the love of my life...you are the ray of sunshine on my rainy days [bodytext] => There are times this past year that I have felt despair
when I felt like I couldnt breathe in the air
I just wanted to run and hide
because I felt like I was dying inside
the fear that I felt took over my soul
leaving deep with in me a black hole
the gray clouds were over my head
constantly filling me with dread
but somewhere out of the blue
a ray of sunshine appeared and it was you.....
you showed me a different way to look all around me
you opened my eyes and made me see
you give me so much love that I have never felt before
you stand by my side keeping my feet on the floor
you are the love of my life something I have always known from the start
you my sweet love fill up my heart
I dont know if you know this , but its a statement that is true
you make me feel better when I feel so blue
you make me smile and give me butterflies still
you my love are my happy pill
when those feelings of sadness come back
I know how to keep myself on track
I think of you and all you have given to me
so my love after reading this I do hope you finally see
it is you...you who saved me


I love you with all my heart...

Love forever and always,
Your GF






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You Saved Me

Contributed by ellewood on Friday, 7th September 2012 @ 07:54:24 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



There are times this past year that I have felt despair
when I felt like I couldnt breathe in the air
I just wanted to run and hide
because I felt like I was dying inside
the fear that I felt took over my soul
leaving deep with in me a black hole
the gray clouds were over my head
constantly filling me with dread
but somewhere out of the blue
a ray of sunshine appeared and it was you.....
you showed me a different way to look all around me
you opened my eyes and made me see
you give me so much love that I have never felt before
you stand by my side keeping my feet on the floor
you are the love of my life something I have always known from the start
you my sweet love fill up my heart
I dont know if you know this , but its a statement that is true
you make me feel better when I feel so blue
you make me smile and give me butterflies still
you my love are my happy pill
when those feelings of sadness come back
I know how to keep myself on track
I think of you and all you have given to me
so my love after reading this I do hope you finally see
it is you...you who saved me


I love you with all my heart...

Love forever and always,
Your GF










Copyright © ellewood ... [ 2012-09-07 19:54:24]
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Re: You Saved Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 8th September 2012 @ 11:16:44 AM AEST
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Beautiful.
smiles,
emy


Re: You Saved Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Malevolent33 on Saturday, 8th September 2012 @ 08:30:37 PM AEST
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Must be a very special person. Keep what makes you happy.


Re: You Saved Me (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Saturday, 8th September 2012 @ 08:37:03 PM AEST
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wow i wish my girl friend could send this to me.
so true and raw with feeling.excellent write.


Re: You Saved Me (User Rating: 1 )
by igba on Monday, 10th September 2012 @ 04:13:17 PM AEST
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unrestrained. ur happiness is contagious




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