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Array ( [sid] => 173645 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => reassembled [time] => 2012-08-19 16:19:14 [hometext] => You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you. ~Ray Bradbury [bodytext] => in a poem
gazing
time opens
solo
and disappears
under
the infernal pen
to wake in me
possessions
claimed
adapted
abandoned
as it is
or might have
been
sounding lost
on and on
needing
creation
a case of letters
unjumbled
and a hush
taking aim
under whispers
from
failed
lips. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 279 [topic] => 73 [informant] => ming [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

reassembled

Contributed by ming on Sunday, 19th August 2012 @ 04:19:14 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

in a poem
gazing
time opens
solo
and disappears
under
the infernal pen
to wake in me
possessions
claimed
adapted
abandoned
as it is
or might have
been
sounding lost
on and on
needing
creation
a case of letters
unjumbled
and a hush
taking aim
under whispers
from
failed
lips.

Copyright © ming ... [ 2012-08-19 16:19:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: reassembled (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Sunday, 19th August 2012 @ 11:02:19 PM AEST
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Mmmmm. . . Nice. . . elle

Re: reassembled (User Rating: 1 )
by UNORTHODOX on Tuesday, 21st August 2012 @ 08:22:41 AM AEST
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True art. A carousel of intellectual girth.
The level of penmanship and delivery,
(you) always astounds me.

-UNORHTODOX

Re: reassembled (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Tuesday, 21st August 2012 @ 08:44:14 AM AEST
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Hi Ming,

I'm not an ''abstract'' type of person - probably
told you that before. But I can't help
observing that there is a unique beauty to
your style of poetry that I can't resist,
although I sometimes struggle to grasp its
true meaning. Keep writing and I'll keep
grasping.

Tommy

Re: reassembled (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Tuesday, 21st August 2012 @ 03:57:16 PM AEST
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You really know how to send my mind into a frenzy and I adore that about your writing. Always have. Such creativity and a style like no other. At times all we have is our thoughts and that can never be wrong. The certainty of our pages is concrete and our words are forever. Always a pleasure to read your work.

duff

Re: reassembled (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 22nd August 2012 @ 12:57:28 AM AEST
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Very panoramic...quite interesting even if I don't fully understand it...or at all. But those are sometimes the most enjoyable to read. The mystery adds excitement.

I could not help but think of people playing Scrabble when I read this part:

a case of letters
unjumbled

Thank you,

Tim

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