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tableaux
Contributed by
ming
on
Sunday, 19th August 2012 @ 03:05:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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bare trees scratch
at the sky
symbolic crows
shriek overhead
unlashed from poppies
and bon bons
off humming
low chants
watching dark roof-tops
and back alley's full of mystery
coaxing mislaid
and lost leafless empty teacups
as our angry Mother
with strong broken winds
wails/moans sad dreams
to living nightmares.
Copyright ©
ming
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2012-08-19 15:05:07]
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Re: tableaux
(User Rating: 1 )
by UNORTHODOX on
Tuesday, 21st August 2012 @ 08:14:59 AM AEST
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Well constructed, this piece is more than meets the eye.
When people read this passage,
mostly it will leave them to questions themselves.
What I mean is, it's brilliant.
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Re: tableaux
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by spud on
Tuesday, 21st August 2012 @ 08:49:57 AM AEST
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Hi Ming,
I feel there's foreboding, loss of hope, and a
call for a rude awakening.
Irresistible ..... as always.
Tommy
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