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Almost
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
on
Wednesday, 8th August 2012 @ 07:38:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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tomarrow's almost over
my heart has shed a tear
for the sad parts of tomarrow
as for now it isnt here
for seeing the emotion
I'll have within my home
it must be better than this
so empty & alone
lonesome in my heart
there's people all around
everybodies talking
but i dont hear a sound
I've blocked there sound out totally
made peace within my soul
in here I'm only half of me
this peace has made me whole
my sentence almost complete
soon I will be free
do they know that I'm coming
& are they missing me
the hot shot poet
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2012-08-08 07:38:09]
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Re: Almost
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by desire on
Wednesday, 8th August 2012 @ 02:29:06 PM AEST
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I can almost feel your loneliness and anticipation
To go home, kinda sad for me
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Re: Almost
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by InfinitePoet on
Sunday, 12th August 2012 @ 01:04:12 AM AEST
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Great,Awesome,Genuine!!! Your A natural at this!!
Keep writing&Posting!!
Always,
Brutal Soul
aka
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