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Array ( [sid] => 173513 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Gifted, Beautiful Creature [time] => 2012-08-01 16:36:14 [hometext] => For Lindsey Stirling:My goodness! You're remarkable [bodytext] => Teach me your method dearest prodigy
Of emulating those sweet majestic notes
Not in the literal; in the metaphorical
For I long to fly with ease all around
From the highest peak to the subtle refrain

Oh the clash of awe and envy aroused
At the sound of your bow and strings
Do they conspire in the midst of my presence
To lure me revealing my faults in the light
There is only one way to rid me of such

I beg of you oh gifted, beautiful creature
Divide my flawed harmony at once
May your bow strike this insanity for our sake
Finish her off and I will become your instrument
My ally you shall be and together
We will perform a musical masterpiece [comments] => 2 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Deidra_Carmichael [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Gifted, Beautiful Creature

Contributed by Deidra_Carmichael on Wednesday, 1st August 2012 @ 04:36:14 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Teach me your method dearest prodigy
Of emulating those sweet majestic notes
Not in the literal; in the metaphorical
For I long to fly with ease all around
From the highest peak to the subtle refrain

Oh the clash of awe and envy aroused
At the sound of your bow and strings
Do they conspire in the midst of my presence
To lure me revealing my faults in the light
There is only one way to rid me of such

I beg of you oh gifted, beautiful creature
Divide my flawed harmony at once
May your bow strike this insanity for our sake
Finish her off and I will become your instrument
My ally you shall be and together
We will perform a musical masterpiece

Copyright © Deidra_Carmichael ... [ 2012-08-01 16:36:14]
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Re: Gifted, Beautiful Creature (User Rating: 1 )
by thehotshotpoet on Thursday, 2nd August 2012 @ 07:28:07 AM AEST
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beautiful writing deidra
thanks for sharing
the hot shot poet

Re: Gifted, Beautiful Creature (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd August 2012 @ 01:14:48 AM AEST
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Sorta how I feel about Tal Wilkenfeld. Great poem!

Thank you.

Tim

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