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[sid] => 173372
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Samantha
[time] => 2012-07-17 02:20:15
[hometext] => To my girlfriend, i love her very much<3
[bodytext] => Why cant you be here where im at? Or why cant i be there with you? The distance between our love has me thinking of what to do.. My ultimate goal is to have you close, and never leave my side! When worst comes to worst ill Always put you first and swallow my pride.
Life sure is funny isnt it? Remember how we met? We connected so fast... I will never forget! May 29th was the day my life went a new direction.. Struck me like lightning, i found my new affection. Just like me! My twin, my new taste of sin, sex is exquisite with every taste of your skin. Your not as lovey dovey as me.. But thats okay. Unconditionally Samantha, i love you anyway.......
[comments] => 6
[counter] => 209
[topic] => 2
[informant] => Compton-tre-block
[notes] => Please do not comment on your own work. Your comment on this poem has been removed. You can send someone a private message if you wish to respond to them. Thank you. Moderator_18 July 17, 2012
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[alanguage] => english
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[ratings] => 0
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[topicname] => LovePoetry
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Samantha
Contributed by
Compton-tre-block
on
Tuesday, 17th July 2012 @ 02:20:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Why cant you be here where im at? Or why cant i be there with you? The distance between our love has me thinking of what to do.. My ultimate goal is to have you close, and never leave my side! When worst comes to worst ill Always put you first and swallow my pride.
Life sure is funny isnt it? Remember how we met? We connected so fast... I will never forget! May 29th was the day my life went a new direction.. Struck me like lightning, i found my new affection. Just like me! My twin, my new taste of sin, sex is exquisite with every taste of your skin. Your not as lovey dovey as me.. But thats okay. Unconditionally Samantha, i love you anyway.......
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Re: Samantha
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by Tiny_Tina on
Tuesday, 17th July 2012 @ 02:32:00 AM AEST
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| You love her so much it made you sick and insincere about religion or morals? |
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Re: Samantha
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by iodinelove on
Tuesday, 17th July 2012 @ 02:42:53 AM AEST
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| This is a bit weird actually. It's almost a desperate plea. |
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Re: Samantha
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by Tiny_Tina on
Tuesday, 17th July 2012 @ 02:51:00 AM AEST
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| I'm referring to your atrocious spelling! Cant is a word entirely not the correct use for the contraction of cannot. Ill is a word, NOT the contraction for I will. Look them up. Good grief! |
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Re: Samantha
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 17th July 2012 @ 05:41:23 AM AEST
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| To me this is a cross between a poem and a rap, some of the rhythm is trying to be a rap.I can feel the heart beneath these words and the struggle as I think you have written this from a difficult situation and I think you mean what you say. |
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Re: Samantha
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by Ndobeldinho on
Tuesday, 17th July 2012 @ 07:40:10 AM AEST
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| Not the best love poem ever, but it is dope though |
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Re: Samantha
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by Stalkee on
Sunday, 22nd July 2012 @ 07:03:53 PM AEST
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"My new taste of sin"
That bit stuck out to me in particular and put a little grin on my face.
Keep it up. |
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