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Fallen Ri Away
Contributed by
Ensis718
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Tuesday, 26th June 2012 @ 09:42:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The cherry blossoms mourn
The falling of the early buds
From the faraway tree
So many ri away.
These buds,
So gentle, so kind
Did nothing wrong.
Spoiled, perhaps,
Yet innocent
Naive to the world.
So the old, ancient,
Beautiful cherry blossoms
Did these little buds a favor.
With a whispery blessing
The cherry sent a hope
That one day
The little buds will open
Just a little bit more
To meet a meeting of joy and fate
With the one who'd understand the most.
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Ensis718
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2012-06-26 21:42:16]
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Re: Fallen Ri Away
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 30th June 2012 @ 02:40:15 AM AEST
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| Can feel the heart of a poet behind these words, and the feel of the writing carries my thoughts as with the cherry blossom.The conclusion leaves us to ponder identity and understanding of who we believe to be the one who'd understand the most leaving a wonderful feeling of spirituality and peace. |
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Re: Fallen Ri Away
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th July 2012 @ 08:31:34 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful! Love it. :) |
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