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Crashing Waves
Contributed by
dvtpdw
on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2012 @ 06:19:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Fog swirls thick and grey around
Pitfalls hidden in the soft ground
Moon camouflages behind the cloud
Night wraps the world in its shroud
Waves pound rocks with a vengeance
Beach sand melds, disguising a presence
Life ebbs forward and back with time
Silently whispering no sense or rhyme
People come into our shadow unknown
Hearts true meaning never really shown
Forced to accept one from another loved
Into life's frame pushed, literally shoved
Swallowing fear, taking hold the welcome
Embracing new stars, family to become
Harnessing apprehension, losing doubt
Eyes blindly ignoring a warning shout
Drawn by family love, others into us
Accept without hinderance, trying trust
Suddenly without hint or slightest glimmer
Love and hope merge to hate and anger
What held true with smiles and laughter
Taken away by other's drone of disaster
Left with falling tears, a heart shattered
Giant wave crashes, leaving body battered
Lonely shores washed inch by inch away
Blue sky brings hope for the sun today
Watching another soul walk away again
Still, for awhile, they were family, friend
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dvtpdw
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2012-05-22 18:19:47]
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Re: Crashing Waves
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by cathartic on
Tuesday, 5th June 2012 @ 12:55:45 AM AEST
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| I really do enjoy the imagery your poems creates. great writing as always. |
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Re: Crashing Waves
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by Restless_Soul on
Wednesday, 4th July 2012 @ 01:19:14 AM AEST
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| I liked it. It really paints a picture. Great writing. |
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Re: Crashing Waves
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by VRR on
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| It's like expressing views by a word-driven paintbrush on the canvas. Awesome! Kudos! |
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