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In Between Heaven and Hell
Contributed by
Onslaught
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Wednesday, 2nd May 2012 @ 06:56:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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What shall I do What shall I do in the meantime In between this heaven and this hell Believing in God more than what the people tell What shall I do What shall I do in the meantime Under the sun Never ending Corruption In between this heaven and this hell
Between zero year and the end times I've bidden my time Smoke and mirrors A day further Time goes on That light on the horizon Is just a mirage Just the glare off a shiny nickel in the dirt Nothing but Despair The entire world In a state of dis-repair We march on further Into the abyss
A day further Time goes on So what shall I do What shall I do in the meantime In between this heaven and this hell Believing in God more than what the people tell What shall I do What shall I do in the meantime Under the sun Never ending Corruption In between this heaven and this hell
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Re: In Between Heaven and Hell
(User Rating: 1 ) by AznDemon300 on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2012 @ 07:03:44 PM AEST (User
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| Very emotional and good job of creating those images. |
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Re: In Between Heaven and Hell
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lee on
Saturday, 5th May 2012 @ 09:53:22 PM AEST (User
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Really liked the line
"between year zero and the end times"
Awesome. |
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Re: In Between Heaven and Hell
(User Rating: 1 ) by RemedyChild26 on
Monday, 7th May 2012 @ 03:54:59 AM AEST (User
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| Between heaven and hell, that's a great way to describe where we are now, nice write. |
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