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Array ( [sid] => 172262 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rebirth of the Rose [time] => 2012-04-30 18:27:22 [hometext] => trying a challenge for a friend [bodytext] => A Rose has a beauty
in the form that it takes
the Petals come together
creating the awesome look it makes

although it isn't Magical
I have to think like this
The Rain makes it grow
The sun gives it beauty simply with a kiss

They do not last forever
although I believe that they try
but for a new Rose to take its place
The Rose must wilt & die

That would be the power
& the beauty from within
one must give up it's life
for the new life to begin

They really are so beautiful
with each & every pose
so no matter what the form is
it is still a Rose
the hot shot poet [comments] => 3 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 38 [informant] => thehotshotpoet [notes] => Corrected spelling per request ~ Moderator_18 Apr 30, 2012 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Tributes )

Rebirth of the Rose

Contributed by thehotshotpoet on Monday, 30th April 2012 @ 06:27:22 PM in AEST
Topic: Tributes

A Rose has a beauty
in the form that it takes
the Petals come together
creating the awesome look it makes

although it isn't Magical
I have to think like this
The Rain makes it grow
The sun gives it beauty simply with a kiss

They do not last forever
although I believe that they try
but for a new Rose to take its place
The Rose must wilt & die

That would be the power
& the beauty from within
one must give up it's life
for the new life to begin

They really are so beautiful
with each & every pose
so no matter what the form is
it is still a Rose
the hot shot poet

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Re: Rebirth of the Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by gypsymaddness on Monday, 30th April 2012 @ 07:11:28 PM AEST
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I thought it was beautiful in it's simplicity. Well written :-)

Re: Rebirth of the Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by ShaeBay on Tuesday, 1st May 2012 @ 03:55:23 PM AEST
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I like it :) The description of the rose's cycle was right on.
Well written,
Shae

Re: Rebirth of the Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Tuesday, 4th August 2015 @ 02:11:46 PM AEST
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Nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I like it!

James

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