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Array ( [sid] => 17209 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Slice [time] => 2003-05-08 00:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i cut, each slit is my outlet,
it leaves huge scars so i wont forget.
a constant reminder of how depressed i am,
these marks scream i dont give a damn.

i think how comforting the scars made me feel
a sick pleasure,almost unreal.
but i never thought i would urn for the pain,
never thought i'd do it again and again.
and i look at the scars, some old, others new,
proof of an obsession i always had but never knew.
its not self harm, of this im sure,
its honest attempts @ death, not just 4 pleasure.
i have tried to kill myself for many years,
my eyes have seen many tears,
but as much as i want, death never shows,
i guess its just how it goes. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 36 [informant] => hardcoreputa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Slice

Contributed by hardcoreputa on Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

i cut, each slit is my outlet,
it leaves huge scars so i wont forget.
a constant reminder of how depressed i am,
these marks scream i dont give a damn.

i think how comforting the scars made me feel
a sick pleasure,almost unreal.
but i never thought i would urn for the pain,
never thought i'd do it again and again.
and i look at the scars, some old, others new,
proof of an obsession i always had but never knew.
its not self harm, of this im sure,
its honest attempts @ death, not just 4 pleasure.
i have tried to kill myself for many years,
my eyes have seen many tears,
but as much as i want, death never shows,
i guess its just how it goes.

Copyright © hardcoreputa ... [ 2003-05-08 00:05:00]
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Re: Slice (User Rating: 1 )
by HumGirl18 on Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 12:20:24 AM AEST
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this is a very honest poem..

but maybe you've haven't died for a reason... maybe it isn't your time to go yet.

keep writing.

Re: Slice (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 07:25:22 AM AEST
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Maybe rather than wishing for death you should try to find a reason to live? Great, honest poem. You did a great job.

sleepless_siren

Re: Slice (User Rating: 1 )
by Cancer on Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 11:21:47 PM AEST
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great write. maybe this will open some eyes to the fact that self-mutilation isn't for the attention. it's an honest attempt to bleed the anger and pain and hatred out of you. strange as it seems to others, it's very theraputic to those who indulge. loved it. very vivid.

The Great Godeater
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Re: Slice (User Rating: 1 )
by M on Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 01:28:27 PM AEST
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I agree, this is definately a great write. every word is so true.
Emily

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