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I keep convincing myself that nothing else could go wrong.
But this world has a way of leaving me broken.
I'm not fine like I keep saying, so stop asking how I've been.
I can't lie any more, I'm tired of holding everything inside.
I don't want anyone to see my weakness, but I can't hide.
Again, I am broken and I can't pull myself together.
This time I fear I'll be broken forever. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 113 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Bookgoddess [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Broken

Contributed by Bookgoddess on Saturday, 24th March 2012 @ 09:57:45 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I'm so tired of trying to be strong.
I keep convincing myself that nothing else could go wrong.
But this world has a way of leaving me broken.
I'm not fine like I keep saying, so stop asking how I've been.
I can't lie any more, I'm tired of holding everything inside.
I don't want anyone to see my weakness, but I can't hide.
Again, I am broken and I can't pull myself together.
This time I fear I'll be broken forever.

Copyright © Bookgoddess ... [ 2012-03-24 21:57:45]
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Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by HIV on Monday, 26th March 2012 @ 09:54:27 AM AEST
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don't worry about what other people think of you.if they think your weak that means there just weaker for thinking there better. I've felt like this before but now im finally trying to find a way to let everything go.even though i'll always go to sleep every night thinking about whats happened to me and other thiings,i tell myself theres nothiing i can do. I hope you find happiness and if you ever want to pm im here for ya.
your friend~HIV

Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by Blackheart on Wednesday, 28th March 2012 @ 01:37:23 PM AEST
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One thing about pain - easier to see than hide. I understand criticism and adversity can really damage one's self-esteem for I've been in that era 5 years ago. But don't give up on yourself just yet, or ever for that matter.
-Donavan 'Blackheart' McNeil

Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 31st March 2012 @ 02:03:02 AM AEST
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My dear Gabby,
You don't have to keep it in yomammaw is always here for you. I'm always ready to listen or cry with you.
U r always in my prayers.
I'm just a heart beat away.
Always luv,and prayer.

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