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Array ( [sid] => 171494 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Voice Inside My Head [time] => 2012-03-24 19:21:32 [hometext] => I was extremely depressed about my life and my relationship with my fiance at this point when I wrote this poem. Some days its like this and some days are good for us I just dont know what to do anymore Writing eases some of the depression worry and fear. [bodytext] => The stillness presses upon me
Eating at me; I wish it would just let me be
Soon everyone that I love will have abandoned me; gone forever away
As I silently scream please don't leave me! Just stay!

The evil voice whispers in my ear
I'm ever so sorry my dear
Like the evil witch from Snow White; I shutter with fear
I want desperately to cut off my ears so that I can no longer hear.

The evil voice cackles icily; I shall never leave you
I will make sure that you get your due
Whilst everyone else has abandoned you, I shall stay; it will be just us two
Isn't this just lovely my dear? Now let me show you a different view.

Now grab the blade from the bedside table; you will be surprised how easily the blade slices across the flesh
First one, now two. Come on love, give it your best!
Now it is time for me to go; soon enough you will find out the rest
As I sit here utterly alone I watched my life-blood seep out of my wrists and my chest. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Shereal_14 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
The Voice Inside My Head

Contributed by Shereal_14 on Saturday, 24th March 2012 @ 07:21:32 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



The stillness presses upon me
Eating at me; I wish it would just let me be
Soon everyone that I love will have abandoned me; gone forever away
As I silently scream please don't leave me! Just stay!

The evil voice whispers in my ear
I'm ever so sorry my dear
Like the evil witch from Snow White; I shutter with fear
I want desperately to cut off my ears so that I can no longer hear.

The evil voice cackles icily; I shall never leave you
I will make sure that you get your due
Whilst everyone else has abandoned you, I shall stay; it will be just us two
Isn't this just lovely my dear? Now let me show you a different view.

Now grab the blade from the bedside table; you will be surprised how easily the blade slices across the flesh
First one, now two. Come on love, give it your best!
Now it is time for me to go; soon enough you will find out the rest
As I sit here utterly alone I watched my life-blood seep out of my wrists and my chest.




Copyright © Shereal_14 ... [ 2012-03-24 19:21:32]
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Re: The Voice Inside My Head (User Rating: 1 )
by HIV on Sunday, 25th March 2012 @ 12:08:52 PM AEST
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I like this it shows emotions in here but the thing is you write poetry that when it's emotional you make the reader try to find the true feelings of how u feel I like that.
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Re: The Voice Inside My Head (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 15th August 2012 @ 02:10:41 AM AEST
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The poem conveys such powerful feelings of isolation and pain. Great writing.




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