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Array ( [sid] => 17122 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Headache [time] => 2003-05-06 12:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My silent feet pad quietly on my mental street
Walking slowly through fiery heat and illusionary heat
Out of the blue came a noise, a sound
A soft, phantasmal pound, pound, pound

It is there never ending, dreamlike and comatose at first
Louder, it gets louder yet, annoyingly loud
First a tap, then a beat, next pounding my mind, my head might burst
Where’s the switch to turn it off, I fear this isn’t the worst

You, the observer, sitting there collective and calmly as can be
Can’t you understand, contemplate or comprehend what’s wrong with me
What is this enigmic anomaly that pains and hounds me so
Help me why don’t you; this isn’t a spectacle or a freak show

My head, my poor mind inside, to us help has been denied
That person refuses to give us aid and the noise is ever growing, it shan’t fade
I can only try to clear my mind of crap and deceit
I won’t go crazy, I can’t lose my sanity, and to a sound I will not meet my defeat

The pain won’t go, it will only intensify
Wait! It is but only in my head, my mind, my sanctuary shed
I deny you sound, you don’t exist, and you are nothing but a lie
It diminished without a trace, no pathway left to show where it fled

Just a few aspirin will stop my body from feeling like lead
Look at you still sitting there watching me
Was it you that caused that din, oh well I care not, I’m better now see
Thank God that I finally got that catastrophe out of my head

Now I can finish my walk down my mental street
Without a rap, tap, tap or a pound, beat, beat
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The Headache

Contributed by TundraHydra on Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



My silent feet pad quietly on my mental street
Walking slowly through fiery heat and illusionary heat
Out of the blue came a noise, a sound
A soft, phantasmal pound, pound, pound

It is there never ending, dreamlike and comatose at first
Louder, it gets louder yet, annoyingly loud
First a tap, then a beat, next pounding my mind, my head might burst
Where’s the switch to turn it off, I fear this isn’t the worst

You, the observer, sitting there collective and calmly as can be
Can’t you understand, contemplate or comprehend what’s wrong with me
What is this enigmic anomaly that pains and hounds me so
Help me why don’t you; this isn’t a spectacle or a freak show

My head, my poor mind inside, to us help has been denied
That person refuses to give us aid and the noise is ever growing, it shan’t fade
I can only try to clear my mind of crap and deceit
I won’t go crazy, I can’t lose my sanity, and to a sound I will not meet my defeat

The pain won’t go, it will only intensify
Wait! It is but only in my head, my mind, my sanctuary shed
I deny you sound, you don’t exist, and you are nothing but a lie
It diminished without a trace, no pathway left to show where it fled

Just a few aspirin will stop my body from feeling like lead
Look at you still sitting there watching me
Was it you that caused that din, oh well I care not, I’m better now see
Thank God that I finally got that catastrophe out of my head

Now I can finish my walk down my mental street
Without a rap, tap, tap or a pound, beat, beat




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Re: The Headache (User Rating: 1 )
by Destiny on Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 05:26:40 PM AEST
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great write. it give you a mental picture. and I'm just gonna say this here but holy ***** you've written tons of poems.lol. neway keep at it
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des


Re: The Headache (User Rating: 1 )
by kittiekat on Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 03:15:01 PM AEST
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wow......this is good! I kinda know how you feel, like the times when u get headaches and u want it to go away, like problems or sumthing like that...lol >^..^<




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