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Array ( [sid] => 17118 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Pillow Fighting Part 3 [time] => 2003-05-06 10:35:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Imagination brings us back again
And this time I promise that we will win
The ultra pillow fight is tonight
Dark and dreamy, waiting for the perfect fight
We’re sneaking and creeping along
Big boys pimpin’ with a song
Chief, Chris, and Caleb split one way
T.R., JD, Josh, Justin, I and another
In the dark a whispered,”Oh, Brother!”
Blair was being used as bait
To save or leave him was still to debate
Oh, well, we thought, who cares about Blair
He’s just an old man who still had his hair
We charged with a cry,
“The Lord beat thy hide!”
To our surprise Blair was beating us down
This old man made us look a clown
Caleb still unstable from his last wound
One hit to the head and he started to swoon
We had been trapped yet once again
But like I said this time we win
JD was swinging left and right
He was the best in this fight
When he tried to help our fallen fellow
The preacher Jon knocked him out after saying hello
This man was loaded with dodge balls
All our men were taking falls
Reinforcements converged onto the battlefield
Pillows and bodies used as shields
We smote them down with our speed and graces
We had played one of our aces
The enemy had backup of course
And they came on many a horse
Chief had a plan with force
We dressed up Caleb as a horse
He looked like a miniature Mr. Ed
Only he was missing the brains in his head
The evil horses tuck-tail and ran
We found out why when the stench “hit the fan”
Something had let go the “Big One”
And our noses agreed that this was not fun
The enemy looked slightly dazed
Some weren’t even fazed
We smelled the stank
But there was something familiar to that rank
A shadow rose from the mist
Looking P.O.ed as he raised his fist
It was the size of three men
With a combo anger of a woman and a mother hen
A flash of lightning showed the face of the creature
And it showed not a happy feature
Then we realized who it was
No one but Spanky, our primate cus’
It all went down hill after that
All because someone called Spanky fat
The Spankster beat them down to the ground
So far that they can’t be found
T.R. was proud of his friend
But what did I tell you
We won in the end
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Pillow Fighting Part 3

Contributed by TundraHydra on Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



Imagination brings us back again
And this time I promise that we will win
The ultra pillow fight is tonight
Dark and dreamy, waiting for the perfect fight
We’re sneaking and creeping along
Big boys pimpin’ with a song
Chief, Chris, and Caleb split one way
T.R., JD, Josh, Justin, I and another
In the dark a whispered,”Oh, Brother!”
Blair was being used as bait
To save or leave him was still to debate
Oh, well, we thought, who cares about Blair
He’s just an old man who still had his hair
We charged with a cry,
“The Lord beat thy hide!”
To our surprise Blair was beating us down
This old man made us look a clown
Caleb still unstable from his last wound
One hit to the head and he started to swoon
We had been trapped yet once again
But like I said this time we win
JD was swinging left and right
He was the best in this fight
When he tried to help our fallen fellow
The preacher Jon knocked him out after saying hello
This man was loaded with dodge balls
All our men were taking falls
Reinforcements converged onto the battlefield
Pillows and bodies used as shields
We smote them down with our speed and graces
We had played one of our aces
The enemy had backup of course
And they came on many a horse
Chief had a plan with force
We dressed up Caleb as a horse
He looked like a miniature Mr. Ed
Only he was missing the brains in his head
The evil horses tuck-tail and ran
We found out why when the stench “hit the fan”
Something had let go the “Big One”
And our noses agreed that this was not fun
The enemy looked slightly dazed
Some weren’t even fazed
We smelled the stank
But there was something familiar to that rank
A shadow rose from the mist
Looking P.O.ed as he raised his fist
It was the size of three men
With a combo anger of a woman and a mother hen
A flash of lightning showed the face of the creature
And it showed not a happy feature
Then we realized who it was
No one but Spanky, our primate cus’
It all went down hill after that
All because someone called Spanky fat
The Spankster beat them down to the ground
So far that they can’t be found
T.R. was proud of his friend
But what did I tell you
We won in the end




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Re: Pillow Fighting Part 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by kittiekat on Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 03:33:17 PM AEST
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once again, a great poem!! hehe...it's reely creative, i like how you described ur friends.
see ya dood. >^..^<


Re: Pillow Fighting Part 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by Devlina on Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 10:44:57 PM AEST
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I really liked this one! It is a great write, and really creative. It took me back to the days when life was easy, and actually fun!




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