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Array ( [sid] => 17104 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => No Title [time] => 2003-05-06 04:05:00 [hometext] => id love some comments on this....im curious to see what i get from all of you. it doesnt feel complete, but tell me what you think! have any good title suggestions too? thanks for reading [bodytext] => Hear the song on the battle field
The song of swords clashing
The epic battle of good against evil
But which side is really good?
And which side is really the evil one?

One side screams he's the good one
And the other cries out that he is
What am I to do when this battle goes on in my head?
When one side of me says yes
And then the other side says no

Well the war rages on
And one side finally wins
I'll go with the side I choose
And make a decision whether it is right or wrong
Either way, I'll have to live with it
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Contributed by Stalkee on Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Hear the song on the battle field
The song of swords clashing
The epic battle of good against evil
But which side is really good?
And which side is really the evil one?

One side screams he's the good one
And the other cries out that he is
What am I to do when this battle goes on in my head?
When one side of me says yes
And then the other side says no

Well the war rages on
And one side finally wins
I'll go with the side I choose
And make a decision whether it is right or wrong
Either way, I'll have to live with it

Copyright © Stalkee ... [ 2003-05-06 04:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by starkindler on Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 04:16:34 PM AEST
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Hmmm...Which is good and which is evil? A dichotomy does seem to help people understand and feel better about their choices. Thus, good is the one you chose, and evil is the one opposite it.
:-) That is the way it works, right?

Yeah...It is interesting thinking about that. Nothing is really that black-and-white. What does it mean when you are not able to choose from two similar shades of gray?

Interesting idea...

Title idea: Battle of Choices
*shrug* ?

Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by kamikazehileray on Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 09:55:06 PM AEST
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nice work...ending gave me a smile..

Tom

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