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The Last rhyme
Contributed by
Boldpen
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Monday, 23rd January 2012 @ 05:33:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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Hey, you said we will meet later, didnt you? I know I dont mean much, but, I hope your word has some value. We were so great together once, I Hope now I am a little more than a nuisance. I am sorry for all the fights we had, I was jealous, I hope you know that you are still my precious. I know I am not in top 7 of your priorities, And I hope you know, by writing this, I dont mean any malice.
I wish I were some more, But doesnt everyone? I wish you would have those feelings for me again, The ones which you dont have for just anyone You are my only fantasy, I wish I were yours, You are my biggest ecstasy, The one who gave me my first cheers.
You were my only friend, I wish you knew. There were many, I kept for the trend, But none of them true I told you things, Things no one else in the world knew about me. And I had lots and lots of dreams, But none of them as good as we.
I wish it hadnt ended so soon, I look at our future, all I see is gloom. Did I not ask for forgiveness enough? If thats the case, I am sorry Please dont be so rough Sometimes my behavior is illusory.
I know I made some mistakes, for which I must atone, But none of them so grave, for you to leave me alone. Didnt I tell you? I love you. The kind of love, I only give to a few. The only thing I want from you, is your time, Is that really such a great crime? I wouldve waited for years and years for you, I wish you werent my best friend, For then, I neednt continue But you are, and I cant live without you, why dont you apprehend?
If his love is true, and blood is red, Id even marry hunchback of notre dame Isnt that what you said? I know you said it in the heat of the moment, you are not to blame.
I was once a merry man, and I fell in the pit of love, I didnt want to be rescued, coz you were so close, I shooed the ones above, I was so happy; it felt so real, it was like time just froze. And then it happened, so suddenly, out of thin air, I looked around, and searched for you, you were no more there,
Its sad to know, I am alone here now, But dont worry girl, Ill manage somehow. Its sad to know, youve fallen again, I wish the pit was mine, You have nothing to lose and everything to gain, I guess its just not my time.
Please forgive me, I am weak, When you look at me like that, I just cannot speak, Forgive me, I was so impatient, I know it wasnt pleasant. Forgive me I made you cry, For some reason, I just have to try Forgive me, I made you worry, Just stop sulking and smile already.
I wont be corny anymore, just one last time, Bear with me for now, this is and will be, my very last rhyme.
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Boldpen
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2012-01-23 05:33:03] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Last rhyme
(User Rating: 1 ) by Shadowman on
Monday, 23rd January 2012 @ 08:35:48 AM AEST (User
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I can truly feel the pain thru all of these stanzas. Tho I doubt it will be your last, it was a good read. Keep up the good work
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Re: The Last rhyme
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 23rd January 2012 @ 03:06:30 PM AEST (User
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Great release of emotional torture
I think
this is not the last from you. |
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