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Array ( [sid] => 169456 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Slipping Away [time] => 2011-12-19 17:51:35 [hometext] => This is dedicated to my friend who loss someone dear to him. [bodytext] => She's slipping away from this world all together. soon everything she ever did and done will hust fade into the wind. soon she will just become a memory.

She's slipping away from this world all together. soon she will be in peace with herself. but as for the loved ones she cares about. only grief will be an option . But soon they will they too will gain their peace of mind back.

She's slipping away from this world all together. Then she will be gone from this world forever. To her family and friends she will say goodbye. It's time for her to go, her time here on earth is up,

She's slipping away from this world all together. To all her family and friends, she says its OK. though they have loss a loved one , it is not in vain. For she has not been lost in herself. For she has died in Christ.

Though indeed she has slipped away. She will be in their heart always. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 94 [topic] => 43 [informant] => BritVent [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Slipping Away

Contributed by BritVent on Monday, 19th December 2011 @ 05:51:35 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

She's slipping away from this world all together. soon everything she ever did and done will hust fade into the wind. soon she will just become a memory.

She's slipping away from this world all together. soon she will be in peace with herself. but as for the loved ones she cares about. only grief will be an option . But soon they will they too will gain their peace of mind back.

She's slipping away from this world all together. Then she will be gone from this world forever. To her family and friends she will say goodbye. It's time for her to go, her time here on earth is up,

She's slipping away from this world all together. To all her family and friends, she says its OK. though they have loss a loved one , it is not in vain. For she has not been lost in herself. For she has died in Christ.

Though indeed she has slipped away. She will be in their heart always.

Copyright © BritVent ... [ 2011-12-19 17:51:35]
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Re: Slipping Away (User Rating: 1 )
by angelus8663 on Monday, 19th December 2011 @ 06:03:50 PM AEST
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quite simply i love it, very thought provoking and slightly haunting. great write

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