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Array ( [sid] => 169329 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Stay Strong [time] => 2011-12-15 15:41:26 [hometext] => For Michelle, Who left us July 2009 [bodytext] => You feel all alone, in the middle of a crowd,
Your voice isn’t heard, no matter how loud.
Nobody notices, anything you do,
You’re invisible to those around you.

You think of the peace, of the blackness of sleep,
To be buried away from this world, six foot deep.
Would anyone care? would anyone know?
If you were to leave us, If you were to go.

Well I bring you a message, simple and clear,
There are people who hold you, so very dear.
You’re not alone, I kid you not,
Family and friends, or have you forgot?

There are people out there, that share the same pain,
Ordinary people and those with money and fame.
Drop the pills; leave the rope; don’t take the fall,
Reach out to someone, just make a call.

I hope that this plea, doesn’t fall on deaf ears,
That you’ll take it in, that you’ll be around for years.
But if temptation still tests you, and thoughts still run rife
You must stay strong and hold onto this precious gift of life.

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 36 [informant] => angelus8663 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Stay Strong

Contributed by angelus8663 on Thursday, 15th December 2011 @ 03:41:26 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

You feel all alone, in the middle of a crowd,
Your voice isn’t heard, no matter how loud.
Nobody notices, anything you do,
You’re invisible to those around you.

You think of the peace, of the blackness of sleep,
To be buried away from this world, six foot deep.
Would anyone care? would anyone know?
If you were to leave us, If you were to go.

Well I bring you a message, simple and clear,
There are people who hold you, so very dear.
You’re not alone, I kid you not,
Family and friends, or have you forgot?

There are people out there, that share the same pain,
Ordinary people and those with money and fame.
Drop the pills; leave the rope; don’t take the fall,
Reach out to someone, just make a call.

I hope that this plea, doesn’t fall on deaf ears,
That you’ll take it in, that you’ll be around for years.
But if temptation still tests you, and thoughts still run rife
You must stay strong and hold onto this precious gift of life.

Copyright Â© angelus8663 ... [ 2011-12-15 15:41:26]
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Re: Stay Strong (User Rating: 1 )
by aliopterix on Thursday, 15th December 2011 @ 06:45:58 PM AEST
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If she could read this she would be very proud. A touching poem, very well written and moving. Al

Re: Stay Strong (User Rating: 1 )
by gypsymaddness on Friday, 16th December 2011 @ 12:48:48 PM AEST
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If she could see this poem you made, she would probably be verry touched, and maybe she would cry. This poem you made is very great, and very emotional. I thank you for sharing this, and letting us feel this pain of yours.

Re: Stay Strong (User Rating: 1 )
by rick2 on Friday, 16th December 2011 @ 05:10:15 PM AEST
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Beautiful!

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