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Array ( [sid] => 16912 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => DYING [time] => 2003-05-02 22:45:00 [hometext] => I don't really have an explanation for this poem. Just words that had to come out before I screamed [bodytext] => I’M DYING INSIDE
CAN’T ANYBODY SEE
DOES ANYONE CARE
WHAT’S HAPPENING TO ME

GOD PLEASE TELL ME HOW THIS HAPPENED

I DID EVERYTHING EXPECTED
I PLAYED BY THE RULES
I WAS ALWAYS THE ONE
WHO CURED EVERYBODY ELSE’S BLUES

WHAT’S GONNA HAPPEN
WHEN MY LIGHT BURNS OUT
OH MY GOD DOESN’T ANYBODY
HEAR MY SOUL SHOUTING OUT

BURNING SENSATIONS
SEARING MY HEART
A SENSE OF URGENCY BUILDING

FEELING MY LIFE FORCE SUFFERING
FROM THE DESPAIR MY BODY
IS YEILDING

SOMEBODY HELP ME
NOW I’M BEGGING
RAISE ME OUT OF THIS
SINKING BOAT

SOMEBODY, ANYBODY
TAKE MY HAND AND HELP
ME STAY AFLOAT

I’M JUST GONNA CLOSE MY EYES
AND GO TO SLEEP
WONDERING WHY I CAN’T WEEP

NO EMOTIONS LEFT
NO TEARS TO CRY
CAN ANYBODY SAVE ME
BEFORE I LET MYSELF DIE
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Shabby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

DYING

Contributed by Shabby on Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 10:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I’M DYING INSIDE
CAN’T ANYBODY SEE
DOES ANYONE CARE
WHAT’S HAPPENING TO ME

GOD PLEASE TELL ME HOW THIS HAPPENED

I DID EVERYTHING EXPECTED
I PLAYED BY THE RULES
I WAS ALWAYS THE ONE
WHO CURED EVERYBODY ELSE’S BLUES

WHAT’S GONNA HAPPEN
WHEN MY LIGHT BURNS OUT
OH MY GOD DOESN’T ANYBODY
HEAR MY SOUL SHOUTING OUT

BURNING SENSATIONS
SEARING MY HEART
A SENSE OF URGENCY BUILDING

FEELING MY LIFE FORCE SUFFERING
FROM THE DESPAIR MY BODY
IS YEILDING

SOMEBODY HELP ME
NOW I’M BEGGING
RAISE ME OUT OF THIS
SINKING BOAT

SOMEBODY, ANYBODY
TAKE MY HAND AND HELP
ME STAY AFLOAT

I’M JUST GONNA CLOSE MY EYES
AND GO TO SLEEP
WONDERING WHY I CAN’T WEEP

NO EMOTIONS LEFT
NO TEARS TO CRY
CAN ANYBODY SAVE ME
BEFORE I LET MYSELF DIE

Copyright Â© Shabby ... [ 2003-05-02 22:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: DYING (User Rating: 1 )
by nightrider on Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 10:20:52 PM AEST
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this is so amazing... so true... you write really well, you have expressed some things ive been trying to for awhile... well done

Re: DYING (User Rating: 1 )
by Shabby on Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 01:01:26 AM AEST
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Thank you so much for your comment...I'm new to the site and it's the first time i've ever posted my poetry...

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