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Childhood
Contributed by
ammar
on
Saturday, 5th November 2011 @ 10:25:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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As children
We werent afraid of seeing the dreams.
Wed fill
All voids with laughter and playful screams.
Never bothered
To find out what couldnt be done;
Wed learn
And accomplish much while having fun.
Expressed ourselves
Much better than we ever would,
With a childs
Promises and hugs that felt so good.
The anger
That would always cheerily be cured
And our agitation,
Back then, never for long endured.
Wed fall
On the ground and get soaked in the rain
Unafraid
Of the dirt and the drops and not complain.
Was long ago
When we werent past our childish ways,
Yet, for us
Theres much to learn from our childhood days.
Copyright ©
ammar
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2011-11-05 10:25:21]
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Re: Childhood
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by FlintHunter on
Saturday, 5th November 2011 @ 02:34:59 PM AEST
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| 'Childhood' is a charming poem. In its easiness it lends itself to the theme of simple childhood. Sure sounds like you had a good time as a child: bet there's a lot of those good old times you could still reach -- if you let go of 'adulthood' for a little while... Regardless, there is a sweet nostalgia here. A sunny reflection. Delightful! -- Flint |
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Re: Childhood
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by RickRoss on
Sunday, 6th November 2011 @ 12:01:20 AM AEST
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| ahg. The memories! The innocence! The tragedy of aging! Thanks for sharing. Keep writing. |
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Re: Childhood
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by KHANVICT on
Wednesday, 9th November 2011 @ 06:12:21 AM AEST
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| Brilliant poem. Brings back great childhood memories. |
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