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Array ( [sid] => 168324 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rose of Dewdrops [time] => 2011-11-03 17:23:46 [hometext] => I really like how this came out, it took me forever to write. Best poem so far, I think. Critique welcomed! :) Quatrains (c) PoetToLearn, 2011 [bodytext] => Roses tiptoe in the breeze,
Their scarlet colours dancing.
Like mud in a patch of green,
A rabbit watches, fancying.

Soft black eyes will stare with ease,
A dark brown ear, quick twitching.
A small pink nose, short sneeze,
A quiet whine pitching.

Flames in a garden,
Roses wink at creature.
Delicate petals never to harden,
A most dazzling feature.

Thorned green stems never brown,
Staying in ripe beauty.
Just to not die to the ground,
An innocent duty.

Dew shining on red velvet,
Droplets of magnifiying spheres.
Shimmering from small sun hid by cloudlet,
Colours unimaginable appear.

Roses tiptoe in the breeze,
Their scarlet colours dancing.
Like fire in a patch of green,
Fragile petals softly prancing. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 30 [informant] => PoetToLearn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => PoemsonBeauty )

Rose of Dewdrops

Contributed by PoetToLearn on Thursday, 3rd November 2011 @ 05:23:46 PM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty

Roses tiptoe in the breeze,
Their scarlet colours dancing.
Like mud in a patch of green,
A rabbit watches, fancying.

Soft black eyes will stare with ease,
A dark brown ear, quick twitching.
A small pink nose, short sneeze,
A quiet whine pitching.

Flames in a garden,
Roses wink at creature.
Delicate petals never to harden,
A most dazzling feature.

Thorned green stems never brown,
Staying in ripe beauty.
Just to not die to the ground,
An innocent duty.

Dew shining on red velvet,
Droplets of magnifiying spheres.
Shimmering from small sun hid by cloudlet,
Colours unimaginable appear.

Roses tiptoe in the breeze,
Their scarlet colours dancing.
Like fire in a patch of green,
Fragile petals softly prancing.

Copyright © PoetToLearn ... [ 2011-11-03 17:23:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Rose of Dewdrops (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 3rd November 2011 @ 06:26:18 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Beautiful writing.
Blessings,
emy

Re: Rose of Dewdrops (User Rating: 1 )
by Robert_Edgar_Burns on Thursday, 3rd November 2011 @ 07:19:53 PM AEST
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Delightful and melodious!
Thought provoking as well,
and picturesque!
Blessings,
Rob

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