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Array ( [sid] => 168060 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Most Desperately [time] => 2011-10-24 09:41:39 [hometext] => This is a short poem about being in love with someone that has lost those feeling for you [bodytext] => I’d have given you my heart if you’d have asked
I’ll give you my future, and wish you had my past
When a heart is in pain as such is mine
You never think that things will work out fine
My world stops when your lips part slightly
Because it is there that mine fit tightly
I stare down my phone, waiting impatiently
Hoping every second that you might think of me
If it be your wish, I will let you go
But I can’t move on, at least until I know
So for us I guess this is farewell
P.S. I love you, in case you couldn’t tell
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Most Desperately

Contributed by crisscross12 on Monday, 24th October 2011 @ 09:41:39 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I’d have given you my heart if you’d have asked
I’ll give you my future, and wish you had my past
When a heart is in pain as such is mine
You never think that things will work out fine
My world stops when your lips part slightly
Because it is there that mine fit tightly
I stare down my phone, waiting impatiently
Hoping every second that you might think of me
If it be your wish, I will let you go
But I can’t move on, at least until I know
So for us I guess this is farewell
P.S. I love you, in case you couldn’t tell




Copyright © crisscross12 ... [ 2011-10-24 09:41:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Most Desperately (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 24th October 2011 @ 12:18:00 PM AEST
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Ah yes, this feeling is a terrible one. You did a good job expressing how you feel and you kept a pretty consistent flow to this piece. Remember; there is a ying to everyone's yang. If your search isn't over, so be it, but keep looking. He/she is out there. Welcome to ypdc crisscross!




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