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Array ( [sid] => 167922 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => patience pays off [time] => 2011-10-18 20:53:36 [hometext] => trying my hand at some love poems comments welcome [bodytext] => when we first met
I wanted to blow you off

just some girl from pride
nothing to special

we texted a bit
but I normally blew you off

back and forth
this cat and mouse game

finally five months later
we go on our first date

we sat there and talked
till the restaurant closed

But I wanted more
I needed to know more

after that night
were hanging out all the time

I make you leave your tooth brush
so you don't sneak away

I love spending time with her
and even her family seems to be fun

I see myself making real plans with you
I wanna see places and explorer

but only with you

my heart and my mind seem to be
getting along at this point

which makes me feel
this could be real for me

and I'm falling head over heels

for the love of my life
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 2 [informant] => vampyrekiss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

patience pays off

Contributed by vampyrekiss on Tuesday, 18th October 2011 @ 08:53:36 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

when we first met
I wanted to blow you off

just some girl from pride
nothing to special

we texted a bit
but I normally blew you off

back and forth
this cat and mouse game

finally five months later
we go on our first date

we sat there and talked
till the restaurant closed

But I wanted more
I needed to know more

after that night
were hanging out all the time

I make you leave your tooth brush
so you don't sneak away

I love spending time with her
and even her family seems to be fun

I see myself making real plans with you
I wanna see places and explorer

but only with you

my heart and my mind seem to be
getting along at this point

which makes me feel
this could be real for me

and I'm falling head over heels

for the love of my life

Copyright © vampyrekiss ... [ 2011-10-18 20:53:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: patience pays off (User Rating: 1 )
by cathartic on Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 08:38:19 PM AEST
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uhm. you randomly switch in the middle of your poem from speaking to the subject of the poem (you), to speaking about the subject of the poem (her). then back again.. i really think its important for you to actually experience love and then write about it. until then, please stick to journal entries. better luck next time(:

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