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Crushed
Contributed by
banjosandwitch
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Tuesday, 18th October 2011 @ 05:23:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Crushed
Just crushed my finger
Only the tip, thank god
Was not paying attention
Took my eye of the ball
Finger turning blue
Mood turning too, throbbing digit
Cold press, pain killers
Clenched teeth, fight pain
Crushed over ice with a slice of lemon, I cry
Bumped it on stuff occasionally
Screams of foul language
Bleep the bleeping, bleep
Internal tears run down face of mirror
Hold back real tears
Crushed, but still strong
Pulsing, pulsing, as I write
By banjosandwitch 13/01/11
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banjosandwitch
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2011-10-18 05:23:36]
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Re: Crushed
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 18th October 2011 @ 01:17:21 PM AEST
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Re: Crushed
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by FlintHunter on
Friday, 21st October 2011 @ 05:53:52 AM AEST
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Great! My deepest sympathy. Get better soon, chap...
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