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Array ( [sid] => 167551 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => pause between breaths [time] => 2011-09-29 20:51:16 [hometext] => There is something about a closet that makes a skeleton terribly restless. ~Wilson Mizner [bodytext] => alone
with phantoms
and
skeletons
hang
ing
in
a
tree
(never
would stay
in closets)
of many threads
in
the sighing
of my realities
holding
strrong
still
love tomorrow. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 73 [informant] => ming [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

pause between breaths

Contributed by ming on Thursday, 29th September 2011 @ 08:51:16 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

alone
with phantoms
and
skeletons
hang
ing
in
a
tree
(never
would stay
in closets)
of many threads
in
the sighing
of my realities
holding
strrong
still
love tomorrow.

Copyright © ming ... [ 2011-09-29 20:51:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: pause between breaths (User Rating: 1 )
by FlintHunter on Friday, 30th September 2011 @ 06:32:48 AM AEST
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'pause between breaths' seems to me to herald a new era within the written sphere of ming. It is -- of course -- a beautiful poem -- one that strikes me as large -- although it's but 'a pause between breaths.' In a way I might have called it 'inspirational poetry,' since it serves me as a call-to-arms. This is an existential statement that we -- despite our skeletons -- (no matter where they are: i love the touch of humor) -- we -- at first -- resign ourselves to another bleak tomorrow and then must admit that we will indeed love tomorrow; that -- despite our sighing and weariness and poetic-tilt -- and --yes, our sadness... that we will all be but bones -- one of these Tomorrows... so why not live-it-up while still able to move by our own power -- and: okay: Choice. Indeed.

A heart-rending shofar-call to the ever-resilient God-given spirit. Most appropriate on Rosh HaShanah -- the Jewish new year.

Contributed by ming on Thursday, September 29 2011 @ 20:51:16 AEST
Topic: Abstract Poetry

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