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[aid] => mick
[title] => can't decide
[time] => 2011-09-16 22:40:59
[hometext] => this is my first poem, hence I would love to have any comments, whatever it be.........please read it
[bodytext] => Sitting on my table, gazing at my books dream world, so tempting it looks; Descending in the arms of sleep lost in dreams to laugh and to weep. Lovely were those days, when, world appeared so simple then; No worry, no care life was full of fun and fair. But gone are those cherished days so hazy now appear my ways; There’s a turmoil in my mind strange! I don't know of what kind. I can’t sleep, help me oh lord! do something to strike a chord; Surge of thoughts, gushed in n out my volition is wholly lost, I doubt; These random thoughts, they perplex me for who are they, I search an epitome; The multitude of strands entangled, make me feel in a prison circled. At times I weep, reasons untrace, with a grand smile pasted on my face; Sitting on the table, still gazing at my books, but dream world, so rusty it looks………. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 134 [topic] => 43 [informant] => vicky [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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