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[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => fatefully crashed
[time] => 2003-04-29 06:35:00
[hometext] => I heard a dave mattews lyric and i thought of this. What do u think the "vehicle" is?
[bodytext] => Crash-
I lost myself, i blinked in a second I crashed. I let my guard down while I blinked and lost my vehicle when it smashed. I lost whats most important what got me this far. I wonder where it is my vehicle went as i paradoxically drive my car. my car-not vehicle are driving, okay Finding the person who I crashed Finding once again, gone, my way. I lost it in this accident when i bumped into her. It wasn't a bump, but more a massive hit and at her sight i cur. Here i am , I lost the vehicle that i came in ; riding And wherever she might go, unknowingly, with her is my vehicle, striding. I drive and search for her who serendipitously crashed into me. As i drive, i think that the design of my vehicle was not mine, anyway, to be. I crashed, I was such an idiot though! Why did i have to hit her so hard. I lost, what i most protected! As i put down my guard. My vehicle is with her,i found myself I thought my vehicle was everything i had to lose. However it wasn't and now i have the will and power to do what I choose. I haven't found her yet though in the midst of all the trash. I will find her again, regardless and take whats fatefully mine from the crash. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 43 [informant] => stateofgray [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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