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[aid] => mick
[title] => A Poem For Us
[time] => 2011-07-19 00:16:47
[hometext] => It has been a while since my last poem... I wrote this for that special someone we all find in our lifetime.. Before I give it to her I would like some suggestions on it...
[bodytext] => As a head's up, most parts are uneven, it may seem different too some people, but to me it is beautiful, because it is truth put into thought... ----------------------------------------------------- (The Opener) As time moves slowly Around you and me, Not a sound speaks clearly Through the endless sea. Pt. I (Reality) There were times in my life I wasn’t too sure, But when I met you I knew love was pure. Your eyes are what caught me A light shade of brown, I got lost in the world With the feeling of falling down. I awoke within seconds Which felt more like days, And I looked once again With something to say. I stated I love you Even more every day, So smart, so funny Perfect in every way. Pt. II (Dream) That night I had a dream About a small wedding, It was ours, so wonderful It was held in the spring. The girls they wore purple The color of you, The men they wore red Showing my love for you. As you come down the isle Not a face was dry, Including my own As I began to cry. I was happy not sad I felt good in a way, I was happy for you On our special day. Your dress so beautiful Like you every day, “Your hair in the sun Is lovely by the way.” Pt. III (Speech) I have written a speech To read to you all, Of memories and moments Some may recall. “My love, my dear Do you remember the time, When I first took your hand And knew you were mine Or maybe the time I wanted to hold you, And even the time I just couldn’t leave you. Do you remember where We had our first kiss, The moments of love The moments like this. I remember it all I know you do too, Because you are me As I am still you. We share the same heart Of love and passion, We share the same soul And even compassion. The love that we have Is stronger that life, If that is wrong Then what is right. I’ll hold you when you’re sad I cry when you’re sad, I will love you forever Even when times are bad. When I hold you in my arms Everything is in its place, I know who I love When I look at your face. And now we are one Forever you and I, I promise I will love you Until the day I die.” Pt. IV (Kiss) So now you are reading this My guess you are crying, You’re leaning on my shoulder There is no denying. There’s one way to end this It’s something you won’t miss, Because the way to end this Is with a simple _ _ _ _. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Also feel free to add what parts you liked best... I like reading those kinds of comments... it gives me hope that this is a good poem for the poetry world... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 2 [informant] => DoubleS [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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