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Array ( [sid] => 166698 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Storm (scond revision) [time] => 2011-07-06 11:15:23 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A storm doles out this dismal night.
Rain drops drizzle down cobblestone course.
Beast and bird burrow safely till light.

No stranger to me, this tatty leather chair.
Shadows dancing, cast the flickering fire.
A creatures den, for the wretched a lair.
Hoping of hopes, dreaming of dreams.
Of such I have lost all desire.

Rain knocks on my door,
Gloom enters once more.
His attendance perceived.
Lest my sanity leave.
By the string that I cling as before.

I long to surrender.
The ability to remember.
My fall into torments of hell.
This chair, the fire, misery befall.
The devils that dance on the floor.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 61 [informant] => erniej [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

A Storm (scond revision)

Contributed by erniej on Wednesday, 6th July 2011 @ 11:15:23 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

A storm doles out this dismal night.
Rain drops drizzle down cobblestone course.
Beast and bird burrow safely till light.

No stranger to me, this tatty leather chair.
Shadows dancing, cast the flickering fire.
A creatures den, for the wretched a lair.
Hoping of hopes, dreaming of dreams.
Of such I have lost all desire.

Rain knocks on my door,
Gloom enters once more.
His attendance perceived.
Lest my sanity leave.
By the string that I cling as before.

I long to surrender.
The ability to remember.
My fall into torments of hell.
This chair, the fire, misery befall.
The devils that dance on the floor.

Copyright © erniej ... [ 2011-07-06 11:15:23]
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Re: A Storm (scond revision) (User Rating: 1 )
by poeticjestix on Wednesday, 6th July 2011 @ 03:17:36 PM AEST
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spikey. Very spikey.

Re: A Storm (scond revision) (User Rating: 1 )
by Deidra_Carmichael on Friday, 8th July 2011 @ 05:53:11 AM AEST
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Oh wow are the two words that come to mind. Self struggle can
Really do a number on oneself and thus one may search for a remedy. I have found one that keeps me secure and stable all the time and with each day that comes. I hope you too will turn to it since it is Divine and is a marvelous Intervention. Take care
And God bless,
Deidra

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