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Array ( [sid] => 166546 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The eyes have it [time] => 2011-06-15 02:38:53 [hometext] => The 1938 County snooker championship - nearly 100 competitors enter and are eliminated - 2 are left - one has one eye, the other is cock-eyed (my G/father) - believe it - it could only happen in real life - have records to prove it. [bodytext] => * * * *

The lights hang low - the room a smoke-filled haze
and snooker buffs are gathered round the baize.
All bets are laid, but will the crowd endear
to these two unlikely gladiators here?

The one-eyed and the cock-eyed take the stage,
look eye-to-eye and up the pressure gauge.
The first one - simply known as 'One-eyed Hugh.'
The second one is 'Glad-eyes Pete Magoo!'

A nine-frame match - the referee declares.
The first to win five frames - the Plate is theirs.
''If they're the best'' (a punter's heard to claim)
''the losers must be colour-blind or lame!''

The balls are set, the first frame's underway
and disparate eyes are fixed upon the play.
They're stunned! It's mesmerising snooker skill!
In ninety minutes one-eye leads four-nil.

For glad-eyes Pete the county prize looks lost,
the time is now to win a quick riposte.
Four-two, four-three, four-all - they're on their feet!
The final frame - the tension, sweat, and heat!
But glad-eyes Pete is ticking like a bomb
and takes that final frame with great aplomb.

Proud to praise my forebear's name in print,
but overjoyed I haven't got his squint!

------ [comments] => 4 [counter] => 243 [topic] => 51 [informant] => spud [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Event )
The eyes have it

Contributed by spud on Wednesday, 15th June 2011 @ 02:38:53 AM in AEST
Topic: Event



* * * *

The lights hang low - the room a smoke-filled haze
and snooker buffs are gathered round the baize.
All bets are laid, but will the crowd endear
to these two unlikely gladiators here?

The one-eyed and the cock-eyed take the stage,
look eye-to-eye and up the pressure gauge.
The first one - simply known as 'One-eyed Hugh.'
The second one is 'Glad-eyes Pete Magoo!'

A nine-frame match - the referee declares.
The first to win five frames - the Plate is theirs.
''If they're the best'' (a punter's heard to claim)
''the losers must be colour-blind or lame!''

The balls are set, the first frame's underway
and disparate eyes are fixed upon the play.
They're stunned! It's mesmerising snooker skill!
In ninety minutes one-eye leads four-nil.

For glad-eyes Pete the county prize looks lost,
the time is now to win a quick riposte.
Four-two, four-three, four-all - they're on their feet!
The final frame - the tension, sweat, and heat!
But glad-eyes Pete is ticking like a bomb
and takes that final frame with great aplomb.

Proud to praise my forebear's name in print,
but overjoyed I haven't got his squint!

------




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Re: The eyes have it (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 15th June 2011 @ 03:03:55 AM AEST
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Great writing.
good job.
Blessings,
emy


Re: The eyes have it (User Rating: 1 )
by Tomboy on Wednesday, 15th June 2011 @ 10:21:25 AM AEST
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Like the old sayings goe, "truth is sometimes stranger than fiction" and "you can't possibly make this stuff up." Your poem transports into a wild, whimsical world. Good read!


Re: The eyes have it (User Rating: 1 )
by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on Saturday, 18th June 2011 @ 12:58:26 PM AEST
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felt like i was actually there,was a real enjoyable read. I look forward to your next poem.


Re: The eyes have it (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Tuesday, 21st June 2011 @ 12:34:06 PM AEST
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Oh Tommy!! What a great piece of writing, eccentric and highly entertaining! A really great read. All the best mate,
Dennis.




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