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Illusions
Contributed by
Tomboy
on
Wednesday, 20th April 2011 @ 06:48:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Images
Clouds
Voices
Colors
Ones self in stories
Flying in white fluffy clouds in the universe.
Planets
Solar systems
Walking on the Moon.
Romantic scenes
Kissing
Hugging,
Embracing in ecstasy
Erotic
Sexual animation
Pornographic scene.
Religion
Angels
Good ones
White robed
Teenage years
Black ones
Demons
Dressed as grim reaper.
Famous celebrities
Singers
Rock
Country.
Presidents past and present
Talking alone with them
On stage as comedian.
Awaking in another place
Back to sleep
In again
In ones own bedroom.
Clowns
Circus
Hula dancing on deserted island
Reliving your countrys historical events.
Illusions are deceiving
When does reality end and fantasy begin?
Copyright ©
Tomboy
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2011-04-20 18:48:56]
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Re: Illusions
(User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflyperfect on
Thursday, 21st April 2011 @ 10:53:38 PM AEST
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| I liked the structure of the poem. I think it helped to illuminate the prospective ideas in the poem. Illusions are a false sense of security, but sometimes necessary. But to know when it ends and reality begins is just as important. Nice write. Enjoyable read. |
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