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Array ( [sid] => 16580 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Summer Rain [time] => 2003-04-27 04:35:00 [hometext] => Maybe you could take some time and read this little poem...and just maybe let me know what you think......I hope you enjoy it.... [bodytext] => Outside my window clouds are forming in the sky
The heaviness that fills those warm summer breezes
Birds chirping and pecking the ground while others fly
Pollen fills the air as it tickles my nose while causing some sneezes
People rushing to get home before the rain
Winds blowing some towels on a near by clothes line
Music of rain drops tapping on my window pane
It's early , it's only ten past nine
Sounds carried in the distance of a whistle blowing of a train as it makes its' way down the tracks
Lightening flashed across a darkened sky while low clouds hover
Thunder rolled loud and clear back to back
Big drops of rain hit the grounds with a splat
As fast as the rain started it was over
A rain bow of colors across a peaceful sky imagin that [comments] => 3 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 43 [informant] => sexygirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Summer Rain

Contributed by sexygirl on Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Outside my window clouds are forming in the sky
The heaviness that fills those warm summer breezes
Birds chirping and pecking the ground while others fly
Pollen fills the air as it tickles my nose while causing some sneezes
People rushing to get home before the rain
Winds blowing some towels on a near by clothes line
Music of rain drops tapping on my window pane
It's early , it's only ten past nine
Sounds carried in the distance of a whistle blowing of a train as it makes its' way down the tracks
Lightening flashed across a darkened sky while low clouds hover
Thunder rolled loud and clear back to back
Big drops of rain hit the grounds with a splat
As fast as the rain started it was over
A rain bow of colors across a peaceful sky imagin that

Copyright © sexygirl ... [ 2003-04-27 04:35:00]
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Re: Summer Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 08:38:00 AM AEST
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very good imagery..you brought to life the summer rain with your words..good write
Shari

Re: Summer Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 05:32:05 PM AEST
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ahh, i love your poetry, and i love the rain too, this poem is vividly beautiful:) ty for sharing!
hugs n' love nessa

Re: Summer Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by ravenblack_phoenix on Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 08:08:55 PM AEST
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Pretty ^.^ I love the rain, once I saw a double rainbow from my backyard, but of course I couldn't find the camera =( But I like your poem =D It reminded me of that moment

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