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Dreams die first
Contributed by
Harsh
on
Monday, 28th March 2011 @ 09:25:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Dreams Die First
There is nothing left unsaid and undone
Just a few brittle memories of laughter and fun
Now its just a grey sky and a dying thirst
Cause at the starting of the day Dreams Die First
Oh how pretty were the days, so wild and sublime
Now its nothing but the rain and reminisces of those times
Every flaw is so bright that its aching my eye
Every word I said is now said to be a lie
My heart breathes a sigh for every verdict made on me
Guess things arent working out as planned by thee
But I was never the one who played by the rules
Guess I have to fake it since you cry out pools
It is just a matter of time for me to change now
I think I will break because I just cant bow
Every bubble of reality is beginning to burst
Cause every starting of the day Dreams Die First
Copyright ©
Harsh
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2011-03-28 21:25:43]
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Re: Dreams die first
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by StacyLynnG on
Monday, 28th March 2011 @ 10:12:19 PM AEST
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| Great rhythem and flow! Reading this was like running into a brick wall lol, it really hit me. Thanks for sharing! |
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Re: Dreams die first
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 29th March 2011 @ 12:46:41 PM AEST
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I thought this was really good.
I loved this
My heart breathes a sigh for every verdict made on me.......... POWERFUL!
Have a super day
Michelle |
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Re: Dreams die first
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by esm7 on
Tuesday, 29th March 2011 @ 08:09:31 PM AEST
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| Very good! Very moving. I really feel like that sometimes. Thanks! |
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Re: Dreams die first
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by DIOGENES on
Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 07:10:14 PM AEST
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| Simple wording & good imagery lead to an easy understanding of your theme. Well done. Thank you. |
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