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[aid] => mick
[title] => that sinking feeling
[time] => 2011-03-28 15:46:53
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[bodytext] => Ancient and pervading dark and inky black the flashing storm . it's mighty foam against the bow will crack the thumping power knows no end the icy blast controls this turbulence brings fear and awe the mighty ship, it rolls biblical darkness mass it attacks the surface a danger will we make it back the battering exhausts yet thrills at the time if this ship stays steady i'm sure we'll be fine the mighty ship is steered into the crashing swirl it's creaks concern, salt lashes burn all that stands unfurled. The captain stands defiant steadfast upon his cause the howling gainst the windows the engine's steady roar there is no alternate the fear we may fall this thin metal bucked won't last with a hole as long as there's fury and smashing of waves we've still got a chance though I don't feel that brave alas there is a failure engineers regret water crashes through the bulkhead our fate is slowly set howling and a crashing is replaced by silent squeeze a fearful fate, I take my place and get down on my knees [comments] => 3 [counter] => 125 [topic] => 43 [informant] => poeticjestix [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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