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In your arms, in that ecstasy, too exquisite
The intoxication, like traveling through light
Through those eons we did together as one

It all comes back to me the same way
One moment of your ancient presence
Your breathe upon me; I find my way back
Overwhelmed with memories of our lives together

The security that blankets over my feverish senses
One more moment with you, I thirst in elation
In your arms, not of this earth that binds me
I reel, I fall, I wake up in you, euphoric again

The ancient secrets of our mingled breathes
Your gentle kisses; ballads from all of time
I am alive in everything you witness, I am you
Take me again beautiful, rhythm me your secrets…

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Déjà vu

Contributed by sasha on Saturday, 26th March 2011 @ 10:11:00 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

There it was again, that familiar awakening
In your arms, in that ecstasy, too exquisite
The intoxication, like traveling through light
Through those eons we did together as one

It all comes back to me the same way
One moment of your ancient presence
Your breathe upon me; I find my way back
Overwhelmed with memories of our lives together

The security that blankets over my feverish senses
One more moment with you, I thirst in elation
In your arms, not of this earth that binds me
I reel, I fall, I wake up in you, euphoric again

The ancient secrets of our mingled breathes
Your gentle kisses; ballads from all of time
I am alive in everything you witness, I am you
Take me again beautiful, rhythm me your secrets…

Copyright Â© sasha ... [ 2011-03-26 22:11:00]
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Re: Déjà vu (User Rating: 1 )
by Zaf_Stud on Sunday, 27th March 2011 @ 01:54:43 AM AEST
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Nice and perceptive way to express your true feel for the one!

Cool write!

Re: Déjà vu (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Sunday, 27th March 2011 @ 03:02:15 AM AEST
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Very clever writing. This is well thought out and brilliantly executed. Well done.

Re: Déjà vu (User Rating: 1 )
by DIOGENES on Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 11:27:26 PM AEST
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Great imagery & flow, the morae were a little sporadic but effective & helped this piece. The rythm was very good. Everything lead to a very smooth delivery & clear understanding of your theme. Very well done. Thank you.

Re: Déjà vu (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 7th April 2011 @ 02:47:16 AM AEST
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i just read this and it reminded me of how i feel sometimes too...it's funny because we have used similar imagery to describe it too - if you like take a look at my "seahorse" and "meeting" and see if you agree! good work imo.

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