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Array ( [sid] => 165377 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Sick Bird [time] => 2011-03-19 23:45:59 [hometext] => always, abraham [bodytext] => Crumbled paper
Dream
Remember me

In love
The world is
A sick bird
Lifted up
In human hands

Left alone
I see the palliation
Of love
In lips I cannot touch
In hands I cannot hold

Fear surrounds me
A dark coagulate
Shadows find me
Weak, uninspired

The world is a sick bird
I am the sky held from it
By hands too heavy to fly
Too strong to understand
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A Sick Bird

Contributed by iodinelove on Saturday, 19th March 2011 @ 11:45:59 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Crumbled paper
Dream
Remember me

In love
The world is
A sick bird
Lifted up
In human hands

Left alone
I see the palliation
Of love
In lips I cannot touch
In hands I cannot hold

Fear surrounds me
A dark coagulate
Shadows find me
Weak, uninspired

The world is a sick bird
I am the sky held from it
By hands too heavy to fly
Too strong to understand

Copyright © iodinelove ... [ 2011-03-19 23:45:59]
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Re: A Sick Bird (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Sunday, 20th March 2011 @ 01:42:20 AM AEST
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Very well written. This is so readable, a free flowing piece that leaves the reader wanting more.

Re: A Sick Bird (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 20th March 2011 @ 12:37:54 PM AEST
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Good morning Abe,
It's morning for me today, (2:30 P.M.)
Great writing as always.
I've been missing you.
Big huggs, smiles, emy
You are certainly right, this Planet is a sick bird.

Re: A Sick Bird (User Rating: 1 )
by Tomboy on Sunday, 20th March 2011 @ 03:25:34 PM AEST
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intresting veiw of the world

Re: A Sick Bird (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 20th March 2011 @ 11:35:42 PM AEST
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I have to admit that I am not exactly sure what this is about but I know that I like it. I don't always concern myself with fully understanding poetry. Sometimes I just go with the flow of it and enjoy. I enjoyed this. Seemed dark, sad, and wanting. Conjured a lot of cool images.

Thanks,

Tim

Re: A Sick Bird (User Rating: 1 )
by Brianimal on Tuesday, 22nd March 2011 @ 01:05:35 AM AEST
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Beautiful. I love poems that spare useless words and allow me to paint the picture. True, it flows well...a slideshow in my mind hat I can feel. I like it alot. Thanks for sharing

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