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Heat
Contributed by
nachi1981
on
Monday, 14th March 2011 @ 07:53:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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t'was a warm summer's night
lit up by bright street lights
a cool breeze flowed from the ocean
setting my thoughts in motion
the moon shone from the sky
idyllic palms standing by
a scene so serene and neat
disturbed by ruffling of sheets
i turn my head to the sound
and witness a sight so profound
peeking through crumpled cover
is my lovely lady lover
with the soft cotton confined
is her softer skin intertwined
like dew on a flower petal
beads of sweat on her back settle
her perfume is strong and sweet
like an invitation so discreet
which i accept and move closer
my thoughts become hoarser
i gaze into her poetic eyes
know what that look implies
i whisper on the those little beads
wonder where this might lead.....
Copyright ©
nachi1981
... [
2011-03-14 19:53:25]
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Re: Heat
(User Rating: 1 )
by ReeseTJ on
Tuesday, 15th March 2011 @ 12:31:48 AM AEST
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Re: Heat
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by Mando on
Wednesday, 16th March 2011 @ 08:57:15 AM AEST
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| this was a good poem |
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Re: Heat
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by thedarkestsheep on
Tuesday, 5th April 2011 @ 07:01:00 AM AEST
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