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a survivor ... a fighter... a beautiful soul
a miracle in the make

your past once so regretted transforms into your strength to go on
Igniting a fire in each lost soul
so hope they wont forsake

the hardest part is over, the door to your future open wide
the storm has finally lifted
no more do you have to hide

Just open your mind and allow the journey to unfold
Your mind contains the key to unlock the chains
That you so tightly hold

Never washed up but washed clean and brand new
Set free to burn so bright
Like a comet in the sky

Daniel ..........your dreams......... are within reach

If only you would try
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Take Flight

Contributed by irisblue on Saturday, 12th March 2011 @ 06:20:04 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

I wish you could see through my eyes all that I see in you...
a survivor ... a fighter... a beautiful soul
a miracle in the make

your past once so regretted transforms into your strength to go on
Igniting a fire in each lost soul
so hope they wont forsake

the hardest part is over, the door to your future open wide
the storm has finally lifted
no more do you have to hide

Just open your mind and allow the journey to unfold
Your mind contains the key to unlock the chains
That you so tightly hold

Never washed up but washed clean and brand new
Set free to burn so bright
Like a comet in the sky

Daniel ..........your dreams......... are within reach

If only you would try

Copyright © irisblue ... [ 2011-03-12 18:20:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Take Flight (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 13th March 2011 @ 01:04:49 AM AEST
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I really like this poem. I like the way it's written. Great message. It really shows some strength and encouragement. Daniel is a fortunate person. Smile!

Smile!

♥

Re: Take Flight (User Rating: 1 )
by Beyfoxman5 on Monday, 12th January 2015 @ 06:32:58 AM AEST
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I wish we could all see that we all are, as you wrote, "Miracles in the make."

Great work.

Best,
Fox

Re: Take Flight (User Rating: 1 )
by Pogivic on Monday, 16th March 2015 @ 07:02:22 PM AEST
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Great words of encouragement so cleverly written. Love it....... Vic

Re: Take Flight (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 11:57:09 AM AEST
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I hope Daniel read this poem, for his sake.

Another gem here.

Invierno

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