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Array ( [sid] => 16449 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Suicidal [time] => 2003-04-23 12:05:00 [hometext] => I sometimes question whether it is worth it. This is the goings on of my mind during my inner struggle. [bodytext] => I killed myself today,
But I didn’t die.
Not completely.

I ended my life today,
But I am still alive
Inside.

I threw myself away,
So why am I still here
With this pain?

This life
Of trouble
Burdens me,

And yet
I keep
Suffering.

I killed myself today,
But I didn’t die.
Why?

I ended my life today,
But I am still alive
Why?

I threw myself away,
But I haven’t justified
Why I’d want to die.

Although
I am
Dead,

I take
A breath
And live.

I killed myself today,
But God
Let me go on.

This is why
I am
Alive. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 582 [topic] => 13 [informant] => TheSpiritx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Suicidal

Contributed by TheSpiritx on Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I killed myself today,
But I didn’t die.
Not completely.

I ended my life today,
But I am still alive
Inside.

I threw myself away,
So why am I still here
With this pain?

This life
Of trouble
Burdens me,

And yet
I keep
Suffering.

I killed myself today,
But I didn’t die.
Why?

I ended my life today,
But I am still alive
Why?

I threw myself away,
But I haven’t justified
Why I’d want to die.

Although
I am
Dead,

I take
A breath
And live.

I killed myself today,
But God
Let me go on.

This is why
I am
Alive.

Copyright Â© TheSpiritx ... [ 2003-04-23 12:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Suicidal (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 02:31:39 PM AEST
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it's always worth it...whenever it feels like it isn't, and when it feels like there's no point...there always is, if only to write more poetry like this...very good...

Re: Suicidal (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 08:03:30 AM AEST
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ah, and i know another reason... so we can read your insightful thoughts... so good to see you posting again... you were the first person to comment and welcome me to YPDC and i frequently look to see if you have put up new work... here it is and it was worth the wait... blessings...

Re: Suicidal (User Rating: 1 )
by Wilder on Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 05:42:52 PM AEST
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One of those "short and to the point" poems. I liked it.

~ Wilder ~

Re: Suicidal (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 10:52:40 PM AEST
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wow Clint!!! its so full of emotion and just pure pain...it definitely captured the struggle, however sad it may be...great write..

Lindsey

Re: Suicidal (User Rating: 1 )
by Destiny on Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 02:01:41 PM AEST
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Hey, you were the first person to comment on one of my poems when I joined this site back in Febuary and I never said thnx so I figured I'd say it now. You're an incredible writer and I loved this poem.

Re: Suicidal (User Rating: 1 )
by Nightingale on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 05:16:15 AM AEST
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very beautiful poem...

Re: Suicidal (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 09:59:33 AM AEST
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Wow! This is an absolutely a great write...seems more like a dark song to me. Two thumbs up!! =o)
Stay well!
Saira

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