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Array ( [sid] => 164335 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Interlude. [time] => 2011-01-19 05:08:49 [hometext] => Today the sun is shining in Wales. The valley is still winter fresh but the birds are singing and one can almost believe that spring as arrived early. If only! [bodytext] => There is contentment in the air today.
The valley is fresh, its dignity preserved in frost
That even now is melting away
To reveal fields diamond flashed and dreaming
Beneath a sky delirious with winter sun.
The hedgerows are trembling with joy,
Blackbirds are kissing, beak on beak, their songs sung lustily
As if spring has already flown the winter nest
And bestowed its magic on the land.
Beneath my feet the earth is stirring briefly,
Renewal entering its own shadow.
The day lengthens, the sky ponders its own mortality,
The sun blinks, aware it seems of its own fragility
In this brief loosening of winter's grip.
[comments] => 7 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 27 [informant] => cashfan1 [notes] => Corrected spelling as requested ~ Moderator_18 Jan 19, 2011 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )

Interlude.

Contributed by cashfan1 on Wednesday, 19th January 2011 @ 05:08:49 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

There is contentment in the air today.
The valley is fresh, its dignity preserved in frost
That even now is melting away
To reveal fields diamond flashed and dreaming
Beneath a sky delirious with winter sun.
The hedgerows are trembling with joy,
Blackbirds are kissing, beak on beak, their songs sung lustily
As if spring has already flown the winter nest
And bestowed its magic on the land.
Beneath my feet the earth is stirring briefly,
Renewal entering its own shadow.
The day lengthens, the sky ponders its own mortality,
The sun blinks, aware it seems of its own fragility
In this brief loosening of winter's grip.

Copyright © cashfan1 ... [ 2011-01-19 05:08:49]
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Re: Interlude. (User Rating: 1 )
by Voyager on Wednesday, 19th January 2011 @ 05:13:31 AM AEST
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Excellent write!!

"the sky ponders it's own mortality,
The sun blinks, a where it seems of it's own fragility
In this brief loosening of winter's grip."

Exceptional lines.

Re: Interlude. (User Rating: 1 )
by RowenM on Wednesday, 19th January 2011 @ 06:07:54 AM AEST
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Ahh! Nature!
So deep, so mysterious.
It's lovable.
Your choice of words is amazing.
I love how you depict the change from Winter to Spring with such an emotion!

Re: Interlude. (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Wednesday, 19th January 2011 @ 06:45:27 AM AEST
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There's the overspilling of a full heart of joy expressing hope as we turn a corner and the signs of the new and fresh are on their way,warm and expressive in Dennis's inimitable way of bringing his world to us x

Re: Interlude. (User Rating: 1 )
by Banjosandwitch on Wednesday, 19th January 2011 @ 06:53:39 AM AEST
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cool very cool almost cold lol

Re: Interlude. (User Rating: 1 )
by huwbeauty on Wednesday, 19th January 2011 @ 07:18:54 AM AEST
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Yeah I feel this,Just been up the mountain where my mother lives,splitting logs,the sun was out the birds were singing it was beautiful,I just wish I could transpose that beauty to the page as wonderfully as you have.Yet another fantastic write.
Mat.

Re: Interlude. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 19th January 2011 @ 10:45:58 PM AEST
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Yep, that is definitely the stuff that you do so greatly, sir. Smile!

Smile!

Re: Interlude. (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Monday, 24th January 2011 @ 11:50:43 AM AEST
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I agree, exceptional lines! You, sir, are my new Robert Frost!

'The day lengthens, the sky ponders its own mortality,
The sun blinks, aware it seems of its own fragility
In this brief loosening of winter's grip.'

ming

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