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the image is cold and oh so clear
i take a step back but the image gets nearer
fear has taken over ive no control left
never have i looked so hard in those eyes
so distant and yet so familiar
so hopeful and so vexed
ive tumbled down the rabbit hole
but the wind just feels so great on my legs
who have i become
something better the the mirrors
i had looked in before then
no safety
no control
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Blind Bliss

Contributed by Darbi on Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 09:30:07 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

i stand still and silent facing the mirror
the image is cold and oh so clear
i take a step back but the image gets nearer
fear has taken over ive no control left
never have i looked so hard in those eyes
so distant and yet so familiar
so hopeful and so vexed
ive tumbled down the rabbit hole
but the wind just feels so great on my legs
who have i become
something better the the mirrors
i had looked in before then
no safety
no control
i want to coninue tumbling down this rabbit hole

Copyright © Darbi ... [ 2011-01-09 21:30:07]
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Re: Blind Bliss (User Rating: 1 )
by scottstone on Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 01:38:26 AM AEST
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nicely written

Re: Blind Bliss (User Rating: 1 )
by OnceAnAngel on Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 09:47:55 AM AEST
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until it swallows you whole? be careful.

Re: Blind Bliss (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 10:46:41 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC>
good luck on that rabbit hole.
Smiles,
emy
Great writing.
Luv your sense of humor.

Re: Blind Bliss (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 05:25:43 PM AEST
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i know exactly what you mean here...probably too late and too deep to dig ourselves out. great write

take care

-K.Z.

Re: Blind Bliss (User Rating: 1 )
by slackoffsamiam on Tuesday, 11th January 2011 @ 10:42:47 PM AEST
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If we lived in a world that made no sense I would absolutely hate this poem, but seeing as this isn't so, I must conceid to the contrary.

Re: Blind Bliss (User Rating: 1 )
by JJAA_91 on Sunday, 16th January 2011 @ 03:07:15 PM AEST
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very nice write with good imagery. well done

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