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[aid] => mick
[title] => Parallel Dreams
[time] => 2011-01-01 12:04:39
[hometext] => Any critiquing will do. Thank you.
[bodytext] => Parallel Dreams I drifted off on a hot summer day the 5th of June beneath the bungalow tree the air was smooth and the sun scorching hot! but it was my thoughts that had gone way off... into a land, far, far away somewhere I did not recognize quite right away but It was until I had met the king his royal highness...do not forget his queen! That my thoughts drifted back to the thought this is my dream, and my dream it shall stay so I walked around for several hours to come marveling the castles and plums upon the ground the crickets that chirped although it was day and the children who played until all went astray It was magnificent 'oh anyone would say! The stars that twinkled and the moon who stayed all day but it was short and I should have known It was only a dream, and a dream it shall stay. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 14 [informant] => PuppetJack [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )
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