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[aid] => mick
[title] => Night Thief
[time] => 2011-01-01 11:55:16
[hometext] => I may add more (a stanza or two perhaps) but for now, this is the full ROUGH DRAFT version of this poem! Please leave what you think of the poem in general! THANK YOU!
[bodytext] => Night Thief There it stood... beneath the trees the moonlight shining radiant beams! from atop the mountain stood a guard on patrol watching, and watching the palace below... This is it I thought to myself my only chance I must take flight now! so I stood my ground and sprinted towards the door the lock was locked! and my heart nearly dropped How now will I pass this door? Break right through and recover my toes? It is dazed and deficient but it must be decent! So I grabbed my body by the hair of my chin and broke right through no more is too be said I got to my feet and dashed on lightly the fire was burning and light gleamed brightly and there on the table of wood was the key to this mission I had spent on nightly I grabbed it with swift motion and exited the door before anyone could say anymore... ©Puppetjack 2011 [comments] => 1 [counter] => 139 [topic] => 49 [informant] => PuppetJack [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => mystical )
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