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bent
Contributed by
ming
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Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 09:07:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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skittering along
letters black wet
and posing
empty answers
matching the glitter
unfallen damp
mute and full
of need
gravely inking
fingers scarred
heart sealed
kept alive
carrying notebooks
full of downpour
ink blossoms
thrive.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2010-12-21 21:07:13]
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Re: bent
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 09:38:49 PM AEST
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| Interesting piece, definitely makes you think. very nice |
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Re: bent
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by xHeathenx on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2010 @ 12:34:22 AM AEST
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| It's questionable, not for whether or not its a good piece, but what is truly intended. I picture the thought of the sage and his scribe from the first Onimusha game. The sage who sat and died to seal the cave and the scribe who wrote with calligraphy, and fled and starved, and ended up dieing from injuries an exhaustion. If you had an original intention for the poem I'd be glad to hear it in a pm. |
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Re: bent
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2010 @ 01:53:57 AM AEST
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| This is indeed very thought provoking. Your style of writing is very individual and this piece is no exception. Strong and smooth, a very fine write. |
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