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Array ( [sid] => 16376 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => fighting to the end [time] => 2003-04-22 00:05:00 [hometext] => This poem has alot of symbolism. i wrote it 3 yrs ago in little less than 5 min, i gave it to my dad for a christmas present and he thought it was the best poem ever because its a story on what we go through everyday. My dads changed alot, he's an alcoholic now becuase of what happened and what is still happening but he still fights to keep his family alive. [bodytext] => When clouds come
it darken's the world
but when u come
the clouds will run.
the sun scores the rain
and you score the clouds
together you form a team.
you brighten up everyones day.
like the sun brightens the sky.
but a storm comes
the storm scores the sun
but you,
you stay and fight.
Fight till the end.
the storm will not run
the sun is gone
but with your stength,
the storm may leave.
the years roll by
the storm is hear to stay,
you have not beaten it
the storm will not run.
the sun is gone.
But you,
you will not give up
you will not give anything away.
the fight costs alot.
and the world may not live,
but with your determination
your love for the world,
the storm will be beaten
the storm will run, and the sun will come.
and one little world will be with you,
with you till the end. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 25 [informant] => gery_giggles [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
fighting to the end

Contributed by gery_giggles on Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



When clouds come
it darken's the world
but when u come
the clouds will run.
the sun scores the rain
and you score the clouds
together you form a team.
you brighten up everyones day.
like the sun brightens the sky.
but a storm comes
the storm scores the sun
but you,
you stay and fight.
Fight till the end.
the storm will not run
the sun is gone
but with your stength,
the storm may leave.
the years roll by
the storm is hear to stay,
you have not beaten it
the storm will not run.
the sun is gone.
But you,
you will not give up
you will not give anything away.
the fight costs alot.
and the world may not live,
but with your determination
your love for the world,
the storm will be beaten
the storm will run, and the sun will come.
and one little world will be with you,
with you till the end.




Copyright © gery_giggles ... [ 2003-04-22 00:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: fighting to the end (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 12:16:45 AM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc, Gery...This is very beautiful... I can see why your Dad loves it so much... Hang in there....
Jenni


Re: fighting to the end (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 01:37:06 PM AEST
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welcome to ypdc. This is a great write. Looking for more too come.
Michelle




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