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Array ( [sid] => 163624 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Still Searching [time] => 2010-12-09 20:34:17 [hometext] => [bodytext] => im breaking into pieces
jumping off tall bridges
im drowning in deep seas
and fallin out of trees

im having these nightmares
its their meaning that scares
im trying to understand
but im too weak to stand

im giving up my dreams
it wasnt as easy as it seems
im forgetting old aspirations
someone give me directions

im losing feelings of thrill
letting go by my own will
im not important anyways
just sit and watch the days

im in need of inspiration
in search for the passion
im thinking of the past
confused on how ive last

im remembering the pain
an unstoppable freight train
im trying to believe in future
because now its what im after
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Still Searching

Contributed by whitt on Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 08:34:17 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

im breaking into pieces
jumping off tall bridges
im drowning in deep seas
and fallin out of trees

im having these nightmares
its their meaning that scares
im trying to understand
but im too weak to stand

im giving up my dreams
it wasnt as easy as it seems
im forgetting old aspirations
someone give me directions

im losing feelings of thrill
letting go by my own will
im not important anyways
just sit and watch the days

im in need of inspiration
in search for the passion
im thinking of the past
confused on how ive last

im remembering the pain
an unstoppable freight train
im trying to believe in future
because now its what im after

Copyright © whitt ... [ 2010-12-09 20:34:17]
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Re: Still Searching (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 08:38:09 PM AEST
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A bit sad but well done.
Blessings,
emy

Re: Still Searching (User Rating: 1 )
by Anbarean on Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 08:43:55 PM AEST
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Great one though sad but still enjoy your writting.

Take care
Anbarean

Re: Still Searching (User Rating: 1 )
by Voyager on Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 10:23:37 PM AEST
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i like it! its honest. i can relate...been thru it b4....

Re: Still Searching (User Rating: 1 )
by MiaPeterson on Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 04:52:11 AM AEST
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Awww! It's so sad yet it's marvellous! Cheer up, everyone has a time in their life when they do through this! You'll get through it :) Just believe!

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