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Array ( [sid] => 163550 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Who Will Share My Pain? [time] => 2010-12-04 22:42:20 [hometext] => Reach out and touch somebody, you might feel your very own hand. [bodytext] => Who will be my friend, no one really understands
this poem is just a device, from which my broken heart stems
with these words I now articulate, does my soul seek to take cover
looking for a real friend to have, willing to share the pain of another

Perhaps you too, having been made numb dealing with your concerns
subconsciously focused on healing your own pain, before it burns
then how can I earnestly ask of you, thinking I would be able to find
someone with the ability to help, maybe I myself am just blind

One who is a prisoner, is not free, nor himself in a position
he's trapped in that continuum, caused by his own condition
so I cry out in the only way I know how, this now my mission
hoping to be shown some light, these feelings need definition

Maybe I am delusional, not wishing to accept the fact
that there does not exists a friend, I could ever attract
then what prosperity awaits me, what are my hopes really worth
perhaps the truth I will find, when I am resting deep in the earth

How I must be a paradox, bold and yet full of contrition
thinking long and hard, I nevertheless came to this decision
yes I said what I have to say, but I know this pain is not my own
many of you reading this, whether you'll admit it, you too are alone

An answer exists, but only the strong willed can discern
the weakness of the human ego, how easy for it to spurn
come off your high horse, for many it is too late
they lack the courage, that independent mind to concentrate

When all is said and done, loneliness of spirit is not exclusively mine
In a nutshell, you dear reader, let this be for a sign
the next time you feel on top of the world, things could not be better
count the days that go by, before you too will be writing this same letter

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Who Will Share My Pain?

Contributed by 2bpositive on Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 10:42:20 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Who will be my friend, no one really understands
this poem is just a device, from which my broken heart stems
with these words I now articulate, does my soul seek to take cover
looking for a real friend to have, willing to share the pain of another

Perhaps you too, having been made numb dealing with your concerns
subconsciously focused on healing your own pain, before it burns
then how can I earnestly ask of you, thinking I would be able to find
someone with the ability to help, maybe I myself am just blind

One who is a prisoner, is not free, nor himself in a position
he's trapped in that continuum, caused by his own condition
so I cry out in the only way I know how, this now my mission
hoping to be shown some light, these feelings need definition

Maybe I am delusional, not wishing to accept the fact
that there does not exists a friend, I could ever attract
then what prosperity awaits me, what are my hopes really worth
perhaps the truth I will find, when I am resting deep in the earth

How I must be a paradox, bold and yet full of contrition
thinking long and hard, I nevertheless came to this decision
yes I said what I have to say, but I know this pain is not my own
many of you reading this, whether you'll admit it, you too are alone

An answer exists, but only the strong willed can discern
the weakness of the human ego, how easy for it to spurn
come off your high horse, for many it is too late
they lack the courage, that independent mind to concentrate

When all is said and done, loneliness of spirit is not exclusively mine
In a nutshell, you dear reader, let this be for a sign
the next time you feel on top of the world, things could not be better
count the days that go by, before you too will be writing this same letter





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Re: Who Will Share My Pain? (User Rating: 1 )
by Anbarean on Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 10:56:53 PM AEST
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I love your poem and specialy the last four lines you write is so well written
and very beautifull ....
keep up your well done work
take care
Anbarean


Re: Who Will Share My Pain? (User Rating: 1 )
by JohnnyFallen on Sunday, 5th December 2010 @ 11:55:13 AM AEST
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The sadness in this poem makes it a wonderful piece of writing. I can relate to your feelings believe it or not. Keep writing.


Re: Who Will Share My Pain? (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 7th December 2010 @ 11:51:49 PM AEST
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Beautiful in its sadness.
This is another well written and emotional poem, powerful to read and take to heart.

Michelle




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