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Array ( [sid] => 163495 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => gossip girl messed me up [time] => 2010-11-30 23:23:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i stare at a world I once knew so well
Once so vibrant
once so happy
once so inviting

i stare at a world with love, once
i once shared
i once cared
i once belonged

the world i once loved now lost me, i sit outside
no walk i can
no care i do
no love i feel
no pain i loath

darkness carry me over, for the outside i do not want
carry me over
leave me low
leave me lust-less
leave me dirty

give me the shame i deserve
spit on me
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 250 [topic] => 63 [informant] => trailmix [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => hbadday )

gossip girl messed me up

Contributed by trailmix on Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 11:23:53 PM in AEST
Topic: hbadday

i stare at a world I once knew so well
Once so vibrant
once so happy
once so inviting

i stare at a world with love, once
i once shared
i once cared
i once belonged

the world i once loved now lost me, i sit outside
no walk i can
no care i do
no love i feel
no pain i loath

darkness carry me over, for the outside i do not want
carry me over
leave me low
leave me lust-less
leave me dirty

give me the shame i deserve
spit on me

Copyright © trailmix ... [ 2010-11-30 23:23:53]
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Re: gossip girl messed me up (User Rating: 1 )
by NewGuy on Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 07:53:12 AM AEST
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wow, powerful words. There are times where we all feel left behind by the world. ENjoyeyab le work. Hope you are able to turn it around thanks for sharing

Re: gossip girl messed me up (User Rating: 1 )
by Jonathon_J_Young on Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 09:35:37 AM AEST
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i like the format of this and can relate to it. at the same time i wouldn't mind being spat on depending on the circumstance.

Re: gossip girl messed me up (User Rating: 1 )
by NightMareShoGun on Wednesday, 17th October 2012 @ 09:27:01 PM AEST
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great job

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